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                                <img class="pull-left" src="static/img/avatar.png" style="border: 1px solid black">
                                <p>My name is Charles McGarvey, and this is my personal site.
                                There is not much here anymore, but I will at least provide a short bio:
-                               I am an <a href="http://www.opensource.org/">open source</a> software developer and independent freelance based in SLC, UT.
-                               I love programming, faith, target-shooting, mathematics, service, traveling, <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Broccoli">broccoli</a>, conservatism, reading, and hiking.
+                               I am an <a href="http://www.opensource.org/">open source</a> software developer based in SLC, UT.
+                               In no particular order, I love programming, target-shooting, mathematics, broccoli, piano-playing, service, traveling,
+                               <a href="http://www.nasa.gov/">space</a>, reading, and hiking.
                                I'm also one of those <a href="http://mormon.org/me/2KPK/Chaz">wacky Mormons</a>.</p>
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                                <p>I am occasionally known to write software for fun and profit.
                                Some of that code is on <a href="https://github.com/chazmcgarvey">my GitHub page</a>
-                               for your own profit and enjoyment, should you find any of it useful.
-                               I use permissive open source licenses, like the <a href="http://opensource.org/licenses/BSD-2-Clause">BSD 2-Clause</a> license.</p>
+                               for your own enjoyment.
+                               Whenever possible, I use permissive open source licenses, like the <a href="http://opensource.org/licenses/BSD-2-Clause">BSD 2-Clause</a> license.</p>
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